He Had Such Quiet Eyes - Notes and Exercise

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He Had Such Quiet Eyes
By: Bibsy Soenharjo

3.1   SYNOPSIS OF THE POEM
The poem is about a woman who has been deceived to think that she was loved by a man with ‘quiet eyes’. She suffers for this and only learns on hindsight not to trust or give in to men who seek women only for pleasure. The poet gives an advice on being able to recognise what is true and what is not, when a person is truly friendly and when he is not. You may lose in the game of love and give your heart away, but knowing the truth of the situation will mean that you will not suffer any lasting losses.

3.2   UNDERSTANDING THE POEM [STANZA BY STANZA]

Stanza 1
The woman is taken up with his ‘quiet eyes’. The eyes mesmerise and beg her to ‘be nice’ to him and make him extremely happy, that is ‘render him paradise’. The poet uses a very long imagery of the eyes ‘breathing desolate sighs’ to enhance the effect of the eyes on the girl. The woman, being enamoured with those eyes, does not notice he is deceiving her. It would not be difficult to see through the man if the woman had her feet on the ground because the eyes have only the ‘thinnest ice’, easy to break through to learn the man’s true nature.

Stanza 2
Something has happened to the woman and she has learnt the truth about the man. The poet suggests that she has learnt the hard way that is she learns her lesson through bad experience. She has made a mistake of trusting the man because she has refused to listen to the advice not ‘to compromise’, that is, lower her standards or expectations in order to please a man who seduces women.

Stanza 3
The poet extends her friendly advice to women to understand what is meant by ‘nice’ what it means when men are ‘nice’ to you. When he is ‘nice’, friendly and pleasant to you, make sure that he is sincere and trustworthy and not because he has ulterior motive, that is he wants something from you in return. The poet further comments that love may be a gamble as suggested in ‘dice’, you take your chances with someone, you may find true love or you may not. The important issue here is that ultimately you have not lost anything because you have not compromised, you are not deceived.

3.3   THE POEM – LINE BY LINE

STANZA 1   MEANING BY LINE

He had such quiet eyes – His eyes were calm and quiet
She did not realise – She did not know
They were two pools of lies- His eyes were like two pools filled with lies
Layered with thinnest ice – Thinly veiled, like very thin ice
To her, those quiet eyes – To the woman, those calm and quiet eyes
Were breathing desolate sighs – Looked very sad and desolate
Imploring her to be nice – The eyes were begging her to be nice to him
And to render him to paradise – And to give him happiness and bliss so that he would feel like he was in paradise (heaven)
STANZA 2   MEANING BY LINE

If only she’d been wise – The woman wished she had been wiser in her past actions
And had listened to the advice – And she had listened to the sound advice given to her by people who cared about her
Never to compromise – They had advised her not to give up her moral values or principles
With pleasure-seeking guys – When she was with men who wanted only pleasure and fun
She’d be free from the ‘hows and whys’ – If she had listened to them, she would not be haunted by questions of hows and whys and the difficult situation she was in.
STANZA 3   MEANING BY LINE

Now here’s a bit of advice – Let me give you a bit of advice
Be sure that nice really means nice – Make sure that the person you think is nice, is truly sincere and trustworthy
Then you’ll never be losing at dice – Then, you will not lose in a game of chance or a game of love where you can lose your heart to an undeserving man
Though you may lose your heart once or twice – Even if you should fall in love and lose your heart to love once or twice
3.4   Elements of the Poem – Literal and Figurative Meaning

Stanza 1
Literal Meaning
When the persona looked into the young man’s sincere-looking eyes, she was deceived into thinking that he needed someone to love. She was not aware that betrayal was second nature to him. His eyes even made her feel compelled to be ‘nice’ to him.

Figurative Meaning
Meeting people and getting involved in a social relationship is part and parcel of life. However, along the way, we may meet two-faced people with ulterior motives. Sometimes, they may come across as so sincere that we innocently accept them as friends or partners.

Stanza 2
Literal Meaning
When the persona was betrayed by the man, she wondered why she had not been wiser. She should have remembered the age-old advice of not believing man blindly. If she had held on to her principles, she would not be asking herself why she had been cheated.

Figurative Meaning
Social relationships can turn sour if one party betrays the other. Hence, one should be careful of the other party’s motives. In any case, do not compromise your principles, as someone who is sincere would not force you into giving up your morals.

Stanza 3
Literal Meaning
The poet advises young ladies to be more careful before getting involved in relationships with men. They must make sure they know then men well. They should learn to differentiate between sincerity and falsehood. They will eventually meet the right man, though they may lose their heats to a few times before that.

Figurative Meaning
It is always good to be cautious before committing to a relationship to avoid serious consequences. You have to make sure you can trust the person you befriend. Do not gamble with your affections, even when you fall in love.

3.5   Themes

(1)   Strong Moral Values and Self-Respect
The woman in the poem got herself into a difficult situation and was cheated by a man because she gave in to his pleading and his insincere lies. She displayed weakness in her moral standing and lost her self-respect as a result. We should never lower our self-esteem no matter how much we like a man. If a man has respect for the woman he loves, he too would not ask her to do what is morally wrong.

(2)   Deception in Appearances
The woman is taken in by the man’s gentle and quiet eyes. She thinks he is a truthful and trustworthy person. The theme in this poem focuses on deception in appearances. Do not judge a person’s character by his appearance. As can be seen in this poem, a gentle and kind-looking man can actually be a wolf in sheep’s clothing.

(3)   Consequences
When we make mistakes in life, we have to live with the consequences. The persona tells us that the woman is haunted with questions of ‘hows and whys’. She probably asks herself every day how she could have fallen for his lies; how she could have forgotten the moral values instilled in her by her parents; how she could have ignored all the advice given to her by people who love and care about her. She would probably also wonder why she had not been wiser in her choice of men; why she did not see through his deception and insincerity.

(4)   Listen to Advice
The poet wants to reach out to all young readers. The woman in the poem wished she ‘had listened to the advice’. She poured out her disappointment, frustration and hurt in this poem and wished she had ‘been wise’. The poet cautions young readers that they should not be impulsive in their actions and they should, above all, listen to the advice of their elders so that they would not end up like the woman – full of regrets.

3.6   Moral Values & Lessons Learnt

(1) Avoid Being Deluded by Looks or Appearance

•   We sometimes encounter people who have ill intentions towards us.
•   These are con men who prey on young women.
•   They look nice and decent but have bad motives.
•   So we should take precaution against them.
•   We should not judge a book by its cover.

(2)   Listen to Beneficial Advice
•   We are given good advice when others feel that we need it.
•   We should listen to their advice.
•   The advice is for our own good.
•   It prevents us from getting hurt or getting into trouble.

3.7   Setting

The poem is set in the present – the world around us now.
It highlights the fact that the people around us are not always sincere.
They may have ulterior motives towards us.
Some have the intention to cheat us.
In the case of the woman in the poem, the man only wanted to have sexual pleasure from her.
However, she saw him as a man in need of love and consolation.
The poem puts forward the need to practise caution when we deal with the people around us.
3.8   EXERCISES

Worksheet 1
Complete the following passage by choosing the correct words.

When the girl met the man, she was very sure she was in (love, trouble) and that he was a good man. He looked so (guilty, innocent) and sincere that she did not realise he would (reciprocate, betray) her love. He begged that she loved and (accepted, refused) him. She gave in, only to be betrayed later. His (honesty, deception) was most unexpected as she had thought he really loved her.

After the betrayal, the girl regretted that she had not listened to the (story, advice) about being wary of men who like to flirt and who only look for (work, fun). If she had been more careful, she would not have been (brooding, rejoicing) over his betrayal.
A piece of advice that all young girls should (disregard, heed) is that one must make sure they can truly (trust, ignore) the person they befriend. Eventually, one will find a sincere partner, although one may fall in love more than once.

Worksheet 2
Based on the poem, write [T] for statements which are true and [F] for statements which are false.

1   The persona was deeply in love with the man.
2   He was charming and sincere to her.
3   She had no idea he was cheating her.
4   He begged her to love him.
5   He proposed marriage to her.
6   He told her she would be able to make him happy.
7   She did not listen to advice about insincere man.
8   She was wondering why and how she was betrayed.
9   The persona was determined to settle down with the man.
10   The poet’s advice is for all young women.
11.   One is likely to fall in love a few times before finding the right partner.
12   One usually settles down with one’s first love.

Worksheet 3
Answer the following questions based on the poem.

1.   What did the persona not realise about the man’s eyes?
A.   They were ‘pools of lies’.
B.   They were ‘pools of love’.
C.   They were ‘pools of hate’.
D.   They were ‘pools of happiness’.

2.   The word ‘quiet’ in the poem can be replaced with
A.   sad
B.   desperate
C.   attractive
D.   wicked-looking

3.   To the persona, what did the man’s eyes show?
A.   Lies
B.   Love
C.   Honesty
D.   Loneliness

4.   The eyes were
A.   breathing and imploring
B.   imploring and watching
C.   watching and crying
D.   crying and smiling

5.   The persona regrets that she
A.   did not marry the man
B.   ran away with the man
C.   did not understand herself
D.   did not listen to good advice

6.   What advice is the persona referring to?
A.   Avoid men at all costs
B.   Never be helpful to men
C.   Go the distance with kind people
D.   Never give in to pleasure-seeking man

7.   The expression ‘hows and whys’ shows that the persona is
A.   sad
B.   happy
C.   excited
D.   regretful

8.   Who is giving the advice?
A.   The girl
B.   The poet
C.   The man
D.   The persona

9.   The expression ‘losing at dice’ is normally associated with
A.   counting
B.   gambling
C.   board games
D.   children’s games

10.   If you lose your heart, it means you are
A.   in love
B.   being kind
C.   not feeling well
D.   not sure of your way